From archive (archive) From: ecl@mtgzy.att.com (Evelyn C. Leeper) Organization: AT&T, Middletown NJ Subject: A TIME TO REMEMBER by Stanley Shapiro Date: 19 Aug 88 14:26:13 GMT A TIME TO REMEMBER by Stanley Shapiro Signet, 1988 (1986c), ISBN 0-451-15484-3, $3.95. A book review by Evelyn C. Leeper Stanley Shapiro is described as having received many "major writing awards, including the Writers Guild of America Award, the Academy Award, the Golden Globe Award and the Laurel Award." The Academy Award was for his script for PILLOW TALK and his other screen credits are for similar films. So when a writer of "glossy comedies" (as film historian Leslie Halliwell describes him) decides to write a serious time travel/alternate history novel, how does he do? Frankly, not well. Shapiro's science is designed to let the story happen, not to make sense. He postulates that people in the lab from which the time traveler is sent back won't detect changes in the past until they leave the lab (because it's shielded), but also that after they leave the lab they will have BOTH sets of memories. This would seem to make the elaborate computer set-up described in the story unnecessary except as an example of that recent cinematic trend, product placement. (One wonders if Apple paid for each mention of one of its products, judging from the way trade names are used to excess. For example, he says, "We then connected a video camera to a MacVision computer, which in turn is connected to an Apple Macintosh. The camera photographs the newspaper's pages, then the MacVision system digitizes the picture and puts it into MacPaint. Two powerful technologies are hooked up, video and the computer." Is this an ad or what?) In addition, the whole book reads more like a script than a novel, which I suppose shouldn't surprise me. The motivation isn't strong enough, and the plot predictable. David wants to go back to the Dallas of November 1963 and stop Kennedy's assassination, hence preventing the Vietnam War and saving his brother Christopher who died in it. He botches it, creating an alternate branch in which he does not achieve his goal. His girlfriend Laura and Dr. Koopman (the inventor of the time machine) detect this when they leave the lab and so--you guessed it--Laura returns to Dallas one day earlier to bail David out. This is even more disastrous, and so.... Silverberg did this in UP THE LINE with fewer characters (one, to be precise, but he did have the advantage of a portable time machine). Shapiro's alternate universes are not exactly original--he has your standard fascist America, for example. I did find it ironic (intentionally, perhaps, on Shapiro's part) that in the fascist America among other things, "it was unlawful to advocate atheism. In keeping with religious beliefs, homosexuality was prohibited." Is this an alternate history or just Georgia? A TIME TO REMEMBER is not being marketed as science fiction. To the mainstream market, it may present some new ideas, but to the science fiction audiences it is a very mundane offering indeed. I would observe that as a story idea for a film, it does have some promise and would probably be aimed at a combination of the same crowd that made BACK TO THE FUTURE so popular and those of us who grew up in the 1960s--there are great opportunities for 1960s' nostalgia here. Evelyn C. Leeper 201-957-2070 UUCP: att!mtgzy!ecl or ecl@mtgzy.att.com ARPA: ecl%mtgzy@att.arpa Copyright 1988 Evelyn C. Leeper