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From: jhedge@wwa.com (Jeanne Hedge)
Subject: Re: [MB-MANGA] 7.4

p 112-3

>[Miki smiles contentedly, clutching the pillow towards her face.]
>narration:
>  I'll be getting a ring,         YUBIWA mo   moraeru  shi...
>  too...  <heart symbol>          ring   too  can-get  and-besides
>
>narration:
>  Eh heh heh!                     e he he_
>
>narration:
>  I wonder if the 24th won't      HAYAku  24-KA ni   nannai    ka na----
>  get here soon...                fast    into-24th  not-turn  I-wonder

<heart symbol>

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p 122-2

>[She looks up at him, full of concern.
>Miki:
>  I'm sorry.  I'm sorry.          gomen ne gomen ne
>
>  We shouldn't have met           SOTO de  MAchiawase nanka suru
>  outside...                      outside  meet       somewhat
>
>                                  n      ja nakatta  ne
>                                  (nom)  did-not     (rhet)
>
>  Let's hurry and get inside      HAYAku  dokka      haitte       attakai mon
>  somewhere and drink             fast    somewhere  go-in-(and)  warm-thing
>  something warm!
>                                  NOmu!
>                                  drink


That last is 'NOmo'.  Is that a form of 'to drink'?


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p 126-1

>[He stares off to the side.]
>Yuu:
>  As a sweetheart...              ...omae no koto
>                                     about-you
>
>Yuu:
>  ...I can't picture you that     KOIBITO    toka      sou iu fuu ni
>  way.                            sweetheart and-such  in-that-kind-of-way
>
>                                  MIrarenaku  natta
>                                  can't-see   became

Missing some text here, beginning 'TOKUBETSU na KANJOO ga...'

particularly      feelings


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p130-3

>[Yuu rummages in the pocket of his jacket.]
>Yuu:
>  I'll go on home ahead of        ...SAKI ni   KAEru    yo
>  you...                             ahead-of  go-home
>
>Yuu:
>  Oh, and this...                 sore to        kore------
>                                  with-that/and  this
>
>  The ring.                       YUBIWA
>
>4
>[Tight shot of the little wrapped box held in his hand.]
>
>5
>[Miki stares at it in disbelief, hands clapped over her face and eyes still
> filled with tears.]
>
>---------------------------------------------------
>p 131
>
>1
>Yuu:
>  'Cause I promised you.          YAKUSOKU shite-ta  kara
>
>Yuu:
>  But I can't keep my promise     RYOKOU no YAKUSOKU wa   mou
>  for the trip anymore...         trip   's promise  (T)  anymore
>
>                                  HAtasenai      kedo...
>                                  can't-fulfill  but
>
>2
>Miki:
>  I can't accept it...            moraenai...
>
>Yuu:
>  ......  But...                  ......  demo


Yuu, you idiot....  you don't give the girl the ring AFTER you break up...

<sheesh, is ANYONE in this manga dimmer than YUU?!  WHAT A BOZO!!!!!!!>




Jeanne Hedge
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