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> Marmalade Boy > Volume 7, Chapter 3 > pages 71-103
> ---------------------------------------------------
> p 71
> 2
> narration:
>   And so he lightheartedly        da kara  ore ni  anna koto     o
>   revealed those things to me.    and-so   to-me   those-things (O)
> 
>                                   KIGARU ni           uchiaketa  n da
>                                   with-a-light-heart  revealed   (explan)

that's why he so

> 3
> narration:
>   Knowing only now that           IMA sara                  ore ga
>   I'm his son may just be         now-(that-it's-too-late)  I   (S)
>   troublesome for him...
>                                   MUSUKO  da  to       wakatta tokoro de
>                                   son     am  (quote)  when-understood
> 
>                                   KARE o   KOMAraseru     dake  ka mo...
>                                   him (O)  made-troubled  only  it-may-be

wakatta-tokoro - yah, it's when undeerstood.  here tho, it's more like
'even though he does know' or 'if he were to know it would only'

> narration:
>   I want to make sure of          TASHIkametai------!!
>   it!!

Take out 'it'

> p 74
> 1
> Miki: [off]
>   Ahh-ah...  They're gone.        a--a...  Itchatta
>                                                           _
>   How sad...                      nanka     SABIshii    naa
>                                   somewhat  lonely/sad  (rhet)

SOmehow, I'm kinda sad?  That's too much...

> 2
> Rumi:                                                             ______
>   Miki!  And yet you were         MIKI ttara       FUTAGO-chan no pawa-- ni
>   overwhelmed and tired out            I-tell-you  by-power-of-the-twins
>   by the power of the little
>   twins.                          MAkete             TSUKArekitte-ta
>                                   is-overcome-(and)  was-being-tired-out
> 
>                                   kuse ni
>                                   and-yet

overwhelmeed by the power...and [all] tired out

> p 75
> 4
> Yuu:
>   There was something I           KIkitai       koto  ga   atta       n desu
>   wanted you to hear.             want-to-hear  thing (S)  there-was  (explan)
> 
>   It's a total secret from        KAZOKU ni wa          ZETTAI HIMITSU   de
>   my family...                    to-family (contrast)  absolute-secret  is

in total secret to/from my famil.

> p 76
> 1
> Eisaku: [off]
>   Something you want me to        KIkitai koto?
>   hear?

something you wanna ask [me]?

> 3
> Yuu:
>   Did you go out with my          HAHA to      tsukiatte-ita    n desu   ka?
>   mother?                         with-mother  were-going-with  (explan)

you were seeing my mother?

> p 77
> 1
> Eisaku: [off]
>   There's no reason for           sonna koto          aru
>   something like that, is         that-kind-of-thing  there-is
>   there?!
>                                   wake nai        daro!?
>                                   have-no-reason  poss-be

yah, but it's closer to 'there's no way' or something.  i'm not sure how
to put it

> 2
> Eisaku: [wide-eyed, sweating]
>   Right away, my admiration       AKOGAre    wa   sugu ni     SHIZEN ni
>   naturally turned into a         admiration (T)  right-away  naturally
>   brotherly love...
>                                   KAZOKU AI ni      KAwatte-itta
>                                   into-family-love  went-and-turn-into
> 
>                                   shi...
>                                   and-besides

can y ou put that right away into 'quickly' and move it around a bit?

PH