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From: jhedge@waterw.com (Jeanne Hedge)
Subject: Re: [MB-MANGA] 4.5 (2/4)

Not really a comment, but more of a suggestion...

p 156-4

>Miwa:
>  I located Yuu by myself.        hitori de   SAGAshiateta  n da
>                                  by-oneself  located       (explan)
>
>                                  YUU no koto
>                                  about-Yuu
>
>  Chiyako-san's c.v. was left     JIMUSHO ni  CHIYAKO-san no
>  behind in the office, so it     in-office               's
>  was pretty easy.
>                                  RIREKISHO ga   NOKOtte-ta     kara
>                                  c.v.      (S)  was-remaining  that's-why
>
>                                  kekkou  KANTAN  datta
>                                  quite   simple  was
>


Would you please consider using the 'resume' translation for RIREKISHO
instead of 'c.v.' (curriculum vitae), else add a comment as to what a c.v.
is?  I don't think I'd be very far off-base if I said that there will
probably be several readers of this translation who don't know what a c.v.
is, but *do* know what a resume is.


Jeanne Hedge

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