From cnishida@netcom.com Sun Mar 10 05:08:29 1996 Received: from netcom17.netcom.com by soyokaze.biosci.ohio-state.edu (8.7.1/1.950110) id FAA27210; Sun, 10 Mar 1996 05:08:27 GMT Received: by netcom17.netcom.com (8.6.13/Netcom) id VAA04520; Sat, 9 Mar 1996 21:08:24 -0800 Date: Sat, 9 Mar 1996 21:08:24 -0800 (PST) From: "Craig H. Nishida" Subject: [MB-MANGA] 3.5 (the REAL 3/4!) To: MB-trans ML Message-ID: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII Part 3 of 4. The next 9 pages of manga for this chapter... In which we meet the dangerous Miwa-san... Please send your comments/critiques/suggestions to the list. Craig Marmalade Boy Volume 3, Chapter 5 pages 155-186 Written and illustrated by Yoshizumi Wataru --------------------------------------------------- p 170 1 [Students exit their classrooms.] P.A.: [off] We're performing the opening SHIGYOUSHIKI o OKONAimasu ceremony. opening-ceremony (O) do/perform All students, form lines in ZENKOUSEITO wa KOUTEI ni the playground, please. entire-student-body (T) on-playground SEIRETSU shite-KUDAsai fall-in-(please)/form-line-(please) 2 [Two girls whispering to each other in the hall are overheard by Meiko and five of her classmates.] girl 1: ____ boso Hey. That girl. hora ano KO girl 2: ____ boso With Namura-sensei... NAMURA-SENSEI to... 3 [Ginta, Miki, the short-haired blonde girl and two boys turn towards the two whispering girls with murderous looks.] Ginta/Miki/3 others: ki_! girl 1/girl 2: biku 4 girl 1/girl 2: Wh-what was that...? na nani yo are... 5 [Smiling, Meiko waves a hand at her protective companions.] Meiko: You shouldn't worry so sonna ni KI o tsukawanakutte ii wa yo much, everyone. that-much not-worry okay minna everyone _____ I really am all right! atashi honto ni DAIJOUBU da kara! I really all-right am that's-why short-haired blonde girl: _ But... demoo... 6 [Miki stops and watches Meiko, Ginta and the short-haired blonde walk on ahead of her off-panel.] --------------------------------------------------- p 171 1 [Miki's view.] narration: I don't think she's as MItaME hodo HEIKI fine as she's letting on. external-appearance extent indifferent ja nai n da to OMOu is-not (explan) think-that narration: You're so strong, Meiko... TSUYOi na MEIKO... 2 [Miki lets loose a small smile for her friend.] narration: Hang in there, 'kay. GAMBArou ne shall-hold-out (rhet) narration: I'm with you! atashi ga tsuite-ru kara ne! I (S) be-with-(one) that's-why (rhet) 3 [Exterior shot of the library building.] --------------------------------------------------- p 172 1 [Something surprises Yuu off-panel.] 2 [His pov of Meiko, who stands in the stacks, two books clutched in left arm and reaching for another book with her right hand. She smiles back.] Meiko: Ah, Matsuura-kun. a MATSUURA-kun Did you come to borrow a HON KAri ni KIta no? book? book to-borrow came (?) 3 Yuu: Akizuki... AKIZUKI... Meiko: The deadline for the club BU-SHI no shimekiri ga magazine is almost here. club-magazine 's closing (S) CHIKAi no yo nearly/close-at-hand I have to gather some SHIRYOU ATSUmenakutcha nannakute ne-- material... material have-to-collect (rhet) 4 Yuu: I didn't think you'd be ...koko e wa mou KOnai coming here anymore... to-this-place (contrast) come-no-more ka to OMOtta (?) thought-that 5 [Meiko looks back at him with her smile lost.] 6 Meiko: [smiling] fu_ Meiko: That's true... ...sou ne --------------------------------------------------- p 173 1 [Meiko closes her eyes and hugs the books to her chest.] Meiko: Certainly... tashika ni I remember various things koko ni KUru to iroiro when I come here... to-this-place when-come several/various OMOiDAshichau kedo recall/remember-(finality) but But it isn't unbearable ZENZEN tsuraku nanka nai at all. entirely unbearably somewhat not-have Meiko: Because they're just nice datte ii OMOiDE bakari da mono memories. because nice-memories only are reason 2 [Meiko smiles to one side. The background turns all bubbly.] Meiko: Even now, I like this place IMA demo koko wa DAISUki yo... a lot... even-now here (T) like-a-lot 3 [Yuu watches her off-panel with a shadow of a smile on his face.] --------------------------------------------------- p 174 1 [Yuu sits at one of the long tables, studying a book laid out before him.] 2 [A guy, with rather dark, long hair, walks in the door. Like Yuu, he wears the school uniform of Touryou. This is Miwa Satoshi.] door FX: ___ kii.. 3 [Miwa's pov of Yuu, who rests his cheek in one hand while studying the book.] 4 [Miwa smiles softly.] --------------------------------------------------- p 175 1 [Miwa sets his textbook down next to Yuu. The book is titled "English III," denoting that Miwa is a year older than Yuu.] books/chair FX: _____ kata_ 2 Miwa: May I sit here? koko ii kai? here okay (?) [Yuu looks up, blankly.] 3 Yuu: Eh...?! Sure. e_... ee Yuu: Sure, but... ii desu kedo okay is but 4 [Filler. A portrait of Miwa.] narration: [top, in English] Satoshi Miwa Horoscope: Sagittarius Bloodtype: AB caption: So, let's meet him again in de wa, mata 4-KAN de volume 4 . then/so again in-volume-4 o-Ai shimashou shall-meet-(humble-form) --------------------------------------------------- p 176 1 [Yuu turns to quickly survey the entire empty library.] Yuu: But... demo... Any other seat is... hoka ni ikura demo SEKI wa... any-other seat (T) Umm... ano... dramatic FX: gara------n 2 [These next 3 panels are Miwa's pov... Here, Yuu turns back to his book, sweating.] Yuu: (Strange guy-y-y...) (...HEN na yatsu~~~~) Yuu: Appears to be a 3rd-year 3-NENSEI rashii ga student... 3rd-year-student apparently/seems and/but Yuu: (Oh well, that's okay.) (ma ikka) 3 [Yuu's eyes suddenly grow large...] 4 [He slowly turns to look back towards us.] Yuu FX: soro~~~.. 5 [View over Yuu's shoulder at Miwa, who is studying Yuu intently. Yuu sweats.] Miwa FX: ji--------_ 6 Yuu: [off] Is-- Is there something I na nanka YOU desu ka?! can do for you?! Miwa: [off] No... iya... Not really. chotto ne --------------------------------------------------- p 177 1 Miwa: [smiling] I'm interested in you. kimi ni KYOUMI ga aru n da in-you an-interest (S) have (explan) 2 [Surprise and fear play across Yuu's features.] 3 [Yuu forces a smile. Miwa beams back.] Yuu: It doesn't make me happy ...OTOKO ni KYOUMI o to receive the interest of by-guys an-interest (O) a guy... MOtarete-mo ureshikunai even-tho-are-getting not-happy n desu kedo... (explan) but Miwa: I feel the same way. DOUKAN da ne 4 [Again a view looking over Yuu's shoulder towards Miwa. Miwa beams a merry smile. Yuu sweats.] Yuu: ......? ?? ......? ?? Miwa FX: niko niko niko 5 [Yuu gets to his feet, staring straight ahead.] Yuu: ______ ___ (This guy's kinda (nanka koitsu abune--... dangerous...) somewhat this-guy dangerous I'm outta here.) NIge yo) Yuu chair FX: gata Miwa: [off] Huh? Are you going home? are KAEtchau no? --------------------------------------------------- p 178 1 Miwa: [pointing] I have that book at home, sono HON uchi ni mo aru yo too. that-book at-home too have 2 [This is Miwa's pov. Yuu, standing, looks out of the corner of his eyes at us. He holds in his hands a book titled, "Gaudi: Parque Guell".] Miwa: [off] _______ _____ The Complete Works of antonio - gaudi ZENSHUU Antonio Gaudi. 3 Yuu: Huh...? hee... Miwa: [smiling up at Yuu] Won't you come and see it kondo MI ni KUru kai? next time? next-time to-see come (?) 4 [Yuu grimaces and recoils slightly.] Yuu: ?! !? No, thank you. ie kekko-- desu Yuu: _koko_ They're all here, too... TOSHOKAN ni mo ZEMBU at-this-place-(library) too entirely sorotte-ru shi... are-all and-besides So then... sore ja 5 door FX: [off] _____ batan! Yuu footsteps FX: [off] da da da da da_ [Miwa looks down at the table, appearing a bit surprised.] --------------------------------------------------- Part 4 next! From jhedge@waterw.com Sun Mar 10 18:51:43 1996 Received: from water.waterw.com by soyokaze.biosci.ohio-state.edu (8.7.1/1.950110) id SAA29085; Sun, 10 Mar 1996 18:51:32 GMT Received: by water.waterw.com (5.65/DEC-Ultrix/4.3) id AA28272; Sun, 10 Mar 1996 13:56:37 -0500 Date: Sun, 10 Mar 1996 13:56:37 -0500 Message-Id: <9603101856.AA28272@water.waterw.com> X-Sender: jhedge@water.waterw.com X-Mailer: Windows Eudora Version 1.4.4 Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" To: mboy-trans@soyokaze.biosci.ohio-state.edu From: jhedge@waterw.com (Jeanne Hedge) Subject: Re: [MB-MANGA] 3.5 Marmalade Boy Volume 3, Chapter 5 pages 155-186 Written and illustrated by Yoshizumi Wataru --------------------------------------------------- p 173-1 >[Meiko closes her eyes and hugs the books to her chest.] >Meiko: > Certainly... tashika ni > > I remember various things koko ni KUru to iroiro > when I come here... to-this-place when-come several/various > > OMOiDAshichau kedo > recall/remember-(finality) but I have many memories when I come here --------------------------------------------------- -------------------End of Chapter------------------ --------------------------------------------------- >Scorecard: > > Miki <---> Yuu <--- Satoshi > ^ ^ > | | > v | > Ginta (-?-) Arimi Meiko <-/-> Natchan > ^ > | > | > Tsutomu Rumi <---> Youji > ^ ^ > | | > v v > Jin <---> Chiyako > >--------------------------------------------------- > >Next up! > >Miki's worried about the competition for Yuu's affections... And goes >head-to-head with...Miwa-san??? Oh, geez... surely Miwa isn't really.... 'dangerous'? Jeanne Hedge jhedge@waterw.com ==================== 75512.1214@compuserve.com "The truth is the one thing that nobody will believe." -- George Bernard Shaw (1856 - 1950) ============ http://www.accsyst.com/jhedge/main.htm ============