From sleeper@ccwf.cc.utexas.edu Mon Nov 13 06:46:03 1995 Received: from goofy.cc.utexas.edu by soyokaze.biosci.ohio-state.edu (8.7.1/1.950110) id GAA16636; Mon, 13 Nov 1995 06:46:02 GMT Received: (from sleeper@localhost) by goofy.cc.utexas.edu (8.6.11/8.6.11/cc-wf-sunos.mc-1.1) id AAA10939; Mon, 13 Nov 1995 00:43:14 -0600 Date: Mon, 13 Nov 1995 00:43:10 -0600 (CST) From: Yutaka Sasagawa X-Sender: sleeper@goofy.cc.utexas.edu To: mboy-trans@soyokaze.biosci.ohio-state.edu Subject: Re: [MB-MANGA] 1.5 (1/4) In-Reply-To: <199511120500.FAA15416@soyokaze.biosci.ohio-state.edu> Message-ID: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII The H-man wrote: > A bit late, and I'm sorry! [But remember... These things came out *once > a month* in Ribbon. But that'd take you... how long? ^_^ > p 161 > 3 > [They scream in each other's faces.] > Ginta: > What?! You said it was nan da yo omae ii tte------ > okay-y-y! what is you okay (quote) > > Miki: ____ > That's no excuse, is it?! iiwake nai desho baka > Stupid! excuse there's-no (poss) fool I think this is closer to "Of course it wasn't okay, stipid!!!" > --------------------------------------------------- > p 162 > > 1 > [Ginta stares at the floor, looking a bit desolate.] > > 2 > [He closes his eyes and rests his forehead against an open palm.] > Ginta: > Shi-i-it... chikusho--... > > 2 > [Still blushing, Miki runs.] > Miki: > (I can't believe it!) (SHINjirannai) > Nitpick, but you have two panel 2's ^_^. > --------------------------------------------------- > p 165 > > 5 > [View from behind Meiko as she mumbles. Yuu looks at her in puzzlement.] > Meiko: > Even though I told him JAMA suru nante Itta no ni... > about interfering... interfere the-likes-of told even-tho > > Maybe, on the contrary, kaette HI o tsukechatta > I set him off. after-all/ set-on-fire-(finality) > on-the-contrary > > kashira > I-wonder > > Meiko FX: > butsu butsu > > Yuu: > Eh? e? > > Meiko: > I mean, what I'm saying... ie kotchi no HANASHI...... > this-way 's a-talk I suggest "Oh no, it's nothing......" would be closer. ---Yutaka From pthirose@rosarita.engr.ucdavis.edu Mon Nov 13 22:44:30 1995 Received: from ucdavis.ucdavis.edu by soyokaze.biosci.ohio-state.edu (8.7.1/1.950110) id WAA19200; Mon, 13 Nov 1995 22:44:26 GMT Received: from rosarita.engr.ucdavis.edu by ucdavis.ucdavis.edu (8.6.12/UCD3.4) id OAA25780; Mon, 13 Nov 1995 14:41:37 -0800 Received: from anchovy.engr.ucdavis.edu by rosarita.engr.ucdavis.edu (4.1/EACS-2.1) id AA22702; Mon, 13 Nov 95 14:41:38 PST Message-Id: <9511132241.AA22702@rosarita.engr.ucdavis.edu> From: pthirose@anchovy.engr.ucdavis.edu (Paul Hirose) Date: Mon, 13 Nov 1995 14:41:36 -0800 In-Reply-To: "Craig H. Nishida" "[MB-MANGA] 1.5 (1/4)" (Nov 12, 12:00am) X-Mailer: Mail User's Shell (7.2.5 10/14/92) To: mboy-trans@soyokaze.biosci.ohio-state.edu Subject: Re: [MB-MANGA] 1.5 (1/4) On Nov 12, 12:00am, "Craig H. Nishida" wrote: > Subject: [MB-MANGA] 1.5 (1/4) > p 157 > 1 > narration: > He'll watch me get flustered atashi ga urotaeru no o MIte---- > and... I (S) getting-flustered (O) see-(and) I'm not sure who's narrating what, but I think this line is more like "[Because he] Watching me get flustered..." > Ginta in Miki's thought-bubble: > I startled you-u-u. DO--YO-- shite-yan no~~ I don't think this is startle is it?? > 2 > Miki: > (So that he doesn't trap (hikkakannai yo-- da) > me...) so-as-not-be-taken-in/trapped I'm not gonna fall for thaaaat > 4 > [Livid, Miki gives him a full-extension slap on the cheek. Ginta's head Recycle that picture from other show > p 161 > 3 > Miki: ____ > That's no excuse, is it?! iiwake nai desho baka > Stupid! excuse there's-no (poss) fool I thik this is ii wake nai, as in "there's no way it would be ok, is there" > 2 > Miki: > (What are you thinking, (NANI KANGAete n no yo GINTA!!) > Ginta?!!) what thinking-about He's not there anymore - she ran off sorta, so maybe what's he thinking > p 163 > 1 > [View pans in to get a close look at her expression as she runs.] > narration: > Why is he doing that sort nande *atashi ni* anna koto > of thing with *me*?! why to-me that-kind-of-thing > > sun no?! > doing to me > narration: > That guy! Would just any ONNA nara DARE demo i-- no ka > girl do?!! woman if-it-is whoever okay (nom) (?) > > aitsu wa!! > that-guy (T) If it's a girl it doesn't matter who, to him? Ok, I would word it different order. > p 164 > 2 > Meiko: > You're on cleanup duty KONSHUU SHUUBAN ja... > this week... this-week weekly-duty this is sorta a question - aren't you on cleanup duty this week > p 165 > 5 > Meiko: > Even though I told him JAMA suru nante Itta no ni... > about interfering... interfere the-likes-of told even-tho sure that's not 'suru na tte ' as in 'i told him not to interfere' > I'll be challenged again mata itsu no HI ka CHOUSEN suru n da!! > someday!! again some-day challenge (explan) I'll challenge [it] again someday On Nov 12, 12:00am, "Craig H. Nishida" wrote: > Subject: [MB-MANGA] 1.5 (2/4) > p 169 > 5 > [Beaming to hide her embarrassment, Miki edges away.] > narration: > I was in confusion, it's ...awatete-ita to wa ie > true, but she's practically was-in-a-flurry it-is-true-but > someone who I've just met... > hotondo SHOTAIMEN no HITO o > almost first-meeting 's person (O) > > AITE ni > = deal-with/pal-up-with ALthough I was in confusion, to deal/take someone who I've just practically jsut met > p 172 > 1 > Arimi: [off] > I was just waiting around atashi KATTE ni > for him, on my own. I of-own-accord > > MAchibuse shite-ta dake > was-lying-in-wait just > > It's not easy for him to nakanaka Atte-kurenai kara > see me. -easily not-meet-(me) that's-why the 'on my own' makes it sound like she was alone - i mean she was, but the katte-ni is more like 'i did it on my own' - it has a slightly selfish spin to it, 'without regard for anyone else' type of thing. the latter sentence is "he won't see me" > 5 > Arimi: > He doesn't talk about it... Itte-nai n da... > not-saying (explan) he hasn't said/talked [to you] about it > p 174 > 1 > Arimi: [off] > But I didn't pay particular da kedo TOKUBETSU KYOUMI wa nakatta > interest. but particular interest (T) not-had but i/he(?) wasn't paritculary intersted > 2 > Arimi: > We were together so much anna ni issho ni ite > and he was such a fun that-much together are-there-(and) > person, that for the first > time... TANOshii HITO wa > cheerful person (T) > > HAJImete de... > for-the-first-time is Not quite. I think you got the wrong part of the sentence attached to each other. He was the first guy that I spent so much time with that was so fun. Well, that's not quite right, but about. > 5 > Yuu: > If it's you we're talking SUZUKI nara > about, Suzuki, you wouldn't if-it-is > have need for any guys. > OTOKO ni wa FUJIYUU shite-nai daro > not-be-in-need-of-guys (poss) you aren't in need of guys... > Yuu: > Even though it's not me, NANI mo ore ja nakute-mo... > anybody... anybody I even-tho-is-not it doesn't have to be me > 6 > Arimi: > I have to be with you. anata de nakya > with-you must-be-there it must be you > p 175 > 5 > Yuu: > ...... You understand in ...... SHItte-te doushite... > what way? [if[ you knew [then] why...[did you ask] > p 176 > 3 > Arimi: [beaming] > There's 3 months, but if 3 ka GETSU tatte-mo yappari > you can't consider making 3-months even-tho-there's sure-enough > me your sweetheart after > all, then I'll definitely atashi o KOIBITO ni suru > give up. me (O) make-sweetheart > > KI ni narenakattara > if-can't-take-a-fancy-to > > sono TOKI wa kippari akiramero wa > that-time (T) definitely give-up even after/if three months go by and you [still] don't feel like making me your sweetheart [after all] then... PH -- Paul Hirose : pthirose@ucdavis.edu : I don't speak for UC Davis, or Engr: ACS : Programmer/Analyst : ACS unless specified otherwise 1039 Academic Surge : ----------------------------------------------------- Davis, CA 95616-8770 : SysAdmin Motto - "/usr/bin/mv /my/life /dev/null"